[quote=Arlear]
Hope this is still accepting. ^^; Fair warning, lots of rather large images below. Sorry for any sloppiness, no preview post option. >.<
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It's....Actually a pretty good CS O.o I'm disappointed I can't take a shit on it, uhhhh, I mean critique it.

Only things I'll say:

3. Hellfire: While it isn't -actually- fire, Souta cloaks Eimin's blade in spiritual energy. Due to the natural orange-and-black coloring of his energy, it looks similar to hellfire, and amplifies his swing by a large amount. (Two post duration, ten post cooldown.)

Just add more detail into what it does. I assume since the blade is cloaked in spirit energy, when he swings the spirit energy shoots out? There's not much explaining what it does, except for 'amplifies his swing by a large amount' but even still, that's not enough explaining I feel...Either I feel that way or I'm stupid, so.

Second thing, your Bankai. I'm sure you know this, but there's no starting off with bankai. Reason I'm putting this out there is because I see people focusing more on their Shikai skills than Bankai (Unless a Captain), but you just may be planning ahead....Nothing wrong with that x)

Other than that....I think the CS is good to go, honestly.