[@FantasyChic] Okay, a few things with the CS. The skills, they have to be ones listed in the skill list. Like Culture isn't on the list, neither is Love Play. Now Psych is but it is a specialised skill. So to have it you would have to have Social Sciences listed under General and then Psych under Speciality. A lot of the skills you have listed just aren't on the available list. Need to go back on those and rework it.

Also, under the characters Psychology, there isn't anything really negative. All characters, or people, in general have things that are bad about them.  I suppose on how you look at it delicate and extravagant could be taken as negative but see about trading one of positive ones out in the top for something a bit more tangible. Now that doesn't mean she would lose a positive trait, that can still be in the personality paragraphs. 

Also, did you want her to be like Inara in the fact she rents one of the personal shuttles? If so, you will want to make sure that she has the skill listed to pilot it.

With relations, don't worry. You are right to wait on those since each one you would work it out with the other player. (Example Pundii and I spoke about our characters history's and working it in together to have them know each other from their home worlds.)