[hider=My Hider] [quote=@Wick] [color=7bcdc8]Name:[/color] Ellenora Baker goes by Nora [color=7bcdc8]Image:[/color] [img]https://s20.postimg.org/q1b8o5ht9/vampire_in_fog_1.jpg[/img] [color=7bcdc8]Age:[/color] 765 years looks about 17-19yrs old [color=7bcdc8]Species:[/color] Draculean Vampire [color=7bcdc8]Goals/Faction:[/color] As a Draculean vampire Nora pretty much just wants to fulfill her own goals at the moment [color=7bcdc8]Backstory:[/color] Ellie as she was called back then, had slipped out of the town festival and gone to meet her beau. They were going to run away together. She snuck home to get her things and leave. Unfortunately, when she got to the meeting place she found a very handsome vampire eating her boyfriend who was already dead. Too frightened to scream and not fast enough to escape the vampire grabbed her and looked into her eyes. Her beautiful eyes. He decided to keep her as his own and he turned her instead of killing her. From the moment she woke up as a vampire she was known as Nora. [color=7bcdc8]Powers/Skills:[/color] Uniquely strong and fast among vampire kind. Shape shifting into traditional Draculean forms: wolf, bat, mist. Mind-altering powers also known as glamouring or power of suggestion, a pleasureful bite, exceptional healing, and weakened by sunlight. She must be asked to enter before she can enter a human's home. [color=7bcdc8]Equipment/Weapons:[/color] She likes to carry a couple of daggers and oddly enough a few throwing stars [color=7bcdc8]Themesong:[/color] Let the bodies hit the floor by Drowning Pool [url]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=04F4xlWSFh0&index=21&list=RDKyIW8CcfQrw[/url] I would like to join [@Wraithblade6][@the grey dust] [/quote] [/hider] Just remember, without a reflection, you can't possibly look this fabulous unless you have help with makeup and hair. Just a few questions: Please define "Uniquely strong and fast among vampire kind" what exactly does this mean? Clarify this as uniquely gives no relative gauge unless she is the weakest and slowest vampire ever. Which would be "uniquely strong and fast" as so would the other extreme of being the strongest and fastest. Please clarify how fast is "uniquely fast" and how strong is "uniquely strong." Regarding Glamour and suggestion: We've got quite a few of these already, however you have not defined a methodology of using this ability. I'm assuming it is a vocal mesmerization/hypnosis, however please clarify if anything needs to happen e.g. touch/presence/range The healing I'm going to assume is standard vampiric regeneration levels. But these two items need to be first addressed.