[@TheUnknowable]Your character looks just fine. About the only thing I can see that needs a little tweaking (and this is totally optional) is his Intrigue. I kind of have that spot reserved for stuff outside of behavior (which is funny because I totally spaced that when I built my character. I have since edited it.) For instance, you say that your character is is small, you would list that in intrigue because he cannot choose to not be small. However, if you mean that he is slightly below average, and it really doesn't have any pull on how he interacts with his environment, then just leave it the way it is. Intrigue doesn't always have to have something in it, is just something to identify something out of the ordinary and outside of your character's behavior.