[@Nallore] Welcome back :) Accepted, but I think you already know that lol [@Morose] Hey! So I've never heard about this character before until now - Vicier had to kind of give me a brief run-down on what was going on, but now that I understand I think this is quite excellent and a great character idea. However, there are a few very nit-picky things I would like to point out that would need to be changed before being accepted. The first thing being her age. At 26, she's the age of my Pinocchio, who by really weird circumstances became a guardian (who failed miserably at his job). That being said, her age here makes her too old to be one of the children, and too young to be a guardian. If your character had remained in Rivenspire the whole time, the age would work, but because she's going to Earth, it separates her from the other children that were sent there. I would recommend keeping her age below twenty if possible. As of right now, Sebastian and Eliza are at the same age of 19 and the oldest kids, so being around that age would be a lot better. Secondly, for some reason the Earth picture slightly bothers me. In your CS, you said that she got picked on for the color of her skin a lot, and while I definitely see it in the 13 years ago picture, the "now" picture's skin tone is very... off. The gif, the 13 years ago and the now pictures just aren't matching up the way they should. Like I said, very nit-picky, but its the details that get me :P