[@Jotunn Draugr] Okies, a few things real quick. [list][*] Color code has to be changed from the one given. (As per the rules)[*] You will want to recheck the rules because you are missing something that should have been included under anything else. [*] Since languages are listed at the top of the CS, you do not have to have them in your skills list; so remove that and add in something else. (Teaching would be a good skill considering his background to have in your pre outbreak skills in its place) [*] Need specifics listed for musical instruments (Each group of instruments would count as 1 skill. So if you wanted him to be able to play Brass, that would take 1 slot, and Piano would take another slot.) [*] Addicted to smoking is not a personality trait. Now Addictive Personality would be. (Your habits clarify what type of [i]"drug"[/i] he is drawn to. [/list]

Think that covers it, so once those corrections are made, tag me to re-review it if you would please. 


[@Caits] Thankies for the edit.