[quote=thebishop]
george age:27 appearance:George is of medium build and slightly wrinkled ,smells like lavender, dark shades and brown eyes silver hair.personality:George is wrinkled because he fears people are out to get him which was true,he hates responsibility and is quick to follow orders. Short bio:A while ago george had witnessed a brutal murder and had been an eyewitness in trial this sort of thing continued and then he was moved to another locationby the feds.He dyed his hair, began his job as a florist,and he would continue to be protected.Equipment:sturdy oak cane, water bottle with purifier,herbs.
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As for this.. It'll need a lot more work.. It's barely even, just, redo it. 

Treat it like a job application, put as much work as you would put into the rp into it.

Also I would suggest changing his age to 47 with that personality and apperance