[@AzazelSlayer] I...I...
I had this really great rejection letter planned and I wrote it up. It was brutal. But I now realise it was too brutal. Centred and everything. So I'm just going to say this before you keep working on your CS: I really don't think you'll be able to join. I'm sorry. You can stick around in the OOC, but I don't think you'll be able to join the IC. I'm sorry.

The main reasons are:

1) Your written English is not at a level where you can enter the RP. While one of the purposes of this RP is to help us all improve our English, and you'll see that we have people with varying levels of proficiency, I just don't think you're at a starting level where you can enter a mid/high casual RP, let alone Divinus which is really a mid/high advanced trying to hide in the casual section. 

2) The way you've reacted to some players has not been very nice to read. I'm sorry to say that you come across as emotional at times and over-sensitive. And this rejection might not be helping ._. ...

3) I can't help but feel that you have difficulty in understanding some of the things you have been told, and despite having read the OP, you seem to not have completely understood some of the more basic concepts (for instance, Nightmares is not really a domain. If anything, as Loki pointed out, it would be a Portfolio of Fear - and Fear, despite being wide, already comes under the Domain of Emotions which is Lifprasil's Domain.)

Once more, I'm sorry. This is only the second time we've rejected somebody on Divinus, and I do it with a heavy heart.

Edit: Hmm, maybe the brutal version was better, actually...

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I, the above-pictured Kho: having seen the quality of your Character Sheet; having seen the difficulty with which you came to understand some parts of the Opening Post despite repeated attempts by players to explain matters to you; having seen the misunderstandings and miscommunications which led to a rather unpleasant and emotional back-and-forth between you and one of our core players; having observed the low level of your written English;- do hereby give verdict and lay down the law.

I must, with the greatest regret, inform you that your application to join [i]Divinus: The Deity Roleplay Mk.II.[/i] has been unsuccessful. You may, if you so wish, continue to grace the OOC, but your attempts to gain passage into the IC currently have a success chance of 0%.
Please accept our sincerest apologies and commiserations. However, you are encouraged to test yourself in the Free Roleplay section, improve your written English, and try again at a later point.

Thank you for applying, and have a pleasant day.[/centre][/hider]