[quote=Regendorf] Another thing I forgot to ask is weather the Gen gas has any odor or immediate symptoms like choking or something. Since I presume it has no color. [/quote] It has a slight odor that is nearly indistinguishable unless you have strong nose and know what you are looking for. [quote=Sturmgewehr] My CS is finally complete. As for those two NPC's I said about. One of them, the one with powers, is Mike, Max's former friend and part of his defunct high school gang, "The 4 Aces". As I've said in history he's the only one that Max dosen't know anything about, after high school ended and they all went their separate ways. And yes he was a part of Team Bravo.The 2nd one is Angela, Max's 17 year old daughter. But since you said it's difficult I guess she will have to wait a little. I'll have a bio up for Mike a little later today. [/quote] Nice, accepted! Oh whoops, I was meaning that Mike would be a little harder to fit it. However, I'm interested in seeing how it's going to turn out. He's going either be someone that was in the military or a scientist to be able to fit into the story. One question I have is which is is Mike going to be on? [quote=Prince of Seraphs] Sorry this took so long, my brother owns the only computer. [/quote] Not a problem. Do you think you can add your height to your appearance section? I'm a little concerned with your power levels. I'm okay with the forcefield but the other three that you listed in level five seems a little too powerful when added to what your character can already do. You might want to move some of your level three powers to level five and some of your level one powers to level three and it should be good Looking good so far everyone!