Necrosis that is perfect, I forgot to mention the screen name or In game name (IGN) Normally (most) games do not let you put spaces in the name, but it can be either or in this. Since I've played a few that will do separated names (first and last) So for future reference, if anybody wishes they can have just one name like: Dragonknight or Metalshadow - But yours is fine and those wishing to do the same are welcome to do so. Side note on your appearance; Most MMORPG's don't start you out looking like a complete badass, BUT, the character creation screen will let you customize your character any which way you want - that being said... If that is how you want your character to look throughout their lives in the VR, any new gear you find (that will be stronger than what you have from the beginning, can be hidden from your character. (For example, if you were to pick up a rare cloak that does not look as good as your starting appearance, you will be given the option to wear it while still keeping the same appearance.. (this seems a bit drawn out for something so simple I apologize. ) 

Personality and history are of little importance to me, I know that throws up warning signs when it comes to going into detail, and how my GM traits go - but as important as they are, they can be defined in the IC thread - With good writers, anything that you can write in OOC should be brought up in character.