Is there expected to be more? Cause it seemed kind of hap hazardous for something that short, or even just for an intro. I realize that the world itself must be introduced but the focus keeps jumping from one thing to the next, first to the burn boy, next to the cop, then to a bank robbery and back to the burn boy. There's also a number of things mentioned that were entirely failed to explain. What do you mean getting an 'occurrence' when someone gets there powers, why would this be the norm to the point where a cop can straight up say someone was lying if they claim otherwise. How do they know the kid is pyrokinetic? From the looks of it he was pulled out of a burning building so burns would be expected, was there precedent of him controlling fire previously, is there some sort of proof that he has these powers? While the security escorting him is impressive why wouldn't they be wearing fire proof gear, or slap the kid in some sort of cuffs that negate his powers. Overall it looks like a promising premise but through most of it the writing is focused on the wrong details. Sort of gives the reader a 'huh' reaction and while I can answer most of my own questions none of them are self explanatory which requires me to essentially assume bits and pieces of story which overall just isn't good story telling. You style isn't bad and you have a solid idea but it needs serious ironing out.