[quote=@Abillioncats]
[@Guess Who] I think you have a good beginning so far. Definitely has a corny feel to it, though I'm assuming that was what you're going for. 
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Yeah, it is. Trying to go for an over-the-top, ridiculous, and campy comedy. Obviously no one else has to go that direction for their entry, it's just what I've decided for mine.

[quote=@harinezumikouken]
[@Guess Who] - LOL! When Shiro is the voice of reason...
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That's when you know everyone is screwed.