[@TheHangedMan] I see you made some changes, and yeah I think everything is working out. You may want to change her Allegiance from Champions to Split or Neutral if she's playing both sides. Also she seems to be some kind of kid genius with her networking and political savy, you might want to add a prodigious intelligence to her skills. Unless Poly has any objections, I'm going to go ahead and say accepted. Question, can she use other people's life energy? And if her creation dies, can she get energy back?

[@Yin Jingshin] Swearing and R-violence are acceptable as long as it doesn't get too overboard, it should be natural not over the top and excessive. And if things get a little too steamy, that's what PMs are for you freaky people.