[quote=Invictus] UGH! It's not very good (crap) but I am truly stumped.....do you want me to post it and work on it as I can? I have a....not too crappy backstory written....but its not the greatest. (my post is updated with it....)Basically he's just some strong dude from New Canaan who was "kidnapped" or "rescued" from the destruction of the town, taken to the Big Empty by who knows what, augmented and then dropped off somewhere. He tinkers for a while and then is approached by the Enclave. They are interested by some of his bastardized tech, and when they see him fight become fascinated by his augmentations. In return for allowing them to study him (though I am pretty sure they would just do what they want anyways), he is given materials and access to Enclave technology for his tinkering. Eventually they realize what an asset he could be and recruit him for Eagle Point.Update: And I'm breaking rules. Ignore me, I'm getting back to work. I need to fix this background....it is completely unacceptable. Lack of detail and purpose would automatically rule for rejection. I apologize, but back to the drawing board. [/quote] [quote=DemonTongue] I think it would help to keep a wip cs on this thread. That way we can give input when new stuff goes up. [/quote] Agreed, put up what you have so far and we'll brainstorm. In fact, pop over to the Cafeteria and we can brainstorm together.