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EDIT: Cafeteria is being really slow for me too :/But yeah, saw what you put up and I like the direction, but the "Knocked out" bits are really weaksauce. Perhaps have him saved by Joshua Graham but decide to go another way than stay and fight the whitelegs and instead head away from the whitelegs towards Canada. The dropping into Nevada is a no as being picked up by the Enclave in that area would be a huge no as all the most dangerous factions would be in the area. They wouldn't risk blowing their cover before they started to even fight back by picking Golem up. I like the idea of the Big Empty, but again, maybe have him escape and head north instead of being knocked out. Once he gets into Canada and settles down or something he could be picked up. Maybe he finds refuge in one of the many vaults that just so happens to be a vault for robots, like 103. Though how he gets from the Big Empty to 103 is up to you.
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Yeah I was going to have him be involved with Graham at first, but then I was worried about interaction with actual characters. As for the rest of it, I agree. It's way too weak, which is why I brought it up in the first place. I'll take your ideas into mind and get back to work.