[@Anarchy] - I like what I see. However, the only things i'd request further would be a more extensive personality description, and while it's alright to create your own planet for the purpose of roleplay, "Poland" seems a little out of place, no offense intended. Your character seems to take alot of inspiration from Mandalore; maybe he could hail from there? 

The history on your character seems a tad bit short. Did you have anything else you'd like to add, or do you plan on revealing more through roleplay? 

[@Ollumhammersong] - Excellent application, loved the extensive History. I added two small details to the CS; check those out before adding this to the character list, and you're in.