[@Lasrever] Nice.
[@Rune_Alchemist] Nice.
[@Pyromaniacwolf] Nice. Though Dark is the primary type, but that's minor unimportant details that don't even affect the game.
[@Eklispe] Nice.
[@Keyblade87] Good.

[@Pikmin Eye] Took you long enough, but I like what I see~! Taking advantage of the story to forge your past and future ambition. I approve. Edit: Of course, I approve of the rest too, considering I even wrote in the introduction that you didn't need to read about towns and such. XD

Thooooouuuuugh... XD ... As cool as it would be to have Team Valor and Candela in Isson stirring things up and encountering your characters, the team that you're referring to is Team Virtue. Just, well... Details. Haha. Also, I called the town Goldshore, but honestly, Goldshire fits it better. XD

Not going to really have the personality of the Pokémon really influence the performance of the Pokémon, because that doesn't make sense to me. But yeah. Haha.

So, aside from some incorrect terminology, Martin is definitely accepted~

Hm, there's no mention of how he came to be given a Pokédex by Kalmia, though. Eh, that's not strictly necessary. Hold a nice speech about your motives and Kalmia will definitely be swayed~ XD

Oh, and if you guys want to know anything specific about the places you live that you feel your characters would know, feel free to ask and I'll answer as I feel suitable~