[@iHxzardx] [i]Like I said :) Definitely can be on the outskirts of that area. The houses in the nicer part of town definitely aren't right next to one another. [/i] [@derseknight] [i]I would just like a little bit more from your character's biography. You listed "See other" for a biography section, and while that works for the living situation- a person's biography can't really be exactly the same as another's. Similar sure, but I'd like to have that expanded on a little bit if that's alright. Especially with such an EXTREME background, I'd like a little more as to who Allan is. Just a couple coding errors in the second parts of the CS [/i]