[quote=@Bishop]
[@Empath] yes and you mention that you turn your head towards us, smiling. Your describing it like we could see you although the tent separates us. Though I'll presume that you lifted the tent cloth.
[/quote]

Actually I had originally thought (but never mentioned) that the tent was semi see through - but I do see a problem with this as it is unlikely that a semi-large group of people would hide behind an opaque tent ^^ Let me do some rewriting and fix the mistakes. 

Edit: fixed the mentioned mistakes - it should be okay now, I hope ^^
Now I better head back to [s]studying[/s] sleeping, then studying.