[@Gat Izen]
I apologize for late response, but here are few tips for you mate. Before anything, I have to say that I sort of love what you came up with there. Now, the thing with this character application process is the following. You can refer to example I've set [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/139802-the-loerynn-chronicles/char#post-3839779]here[/url]. As you can see, I kept stuff with character description pretty much straight forward. I never gave his age and other stuff related to such information up. That's the magic in this RP, everything is to be found via conversation between our characters or if your character talks to himself, thinks about something and so on.

I hope you get the point behind my post. I am sure you'll get the thing when you see my character application/information. Can you please make a character application in that section once again, following the example I set with Thogar?