[@Onarax]

Maybe they just jumped out at me, don't fret. I usually dislike people straying from a traditional prose style, but like I said that's just me. They were executed fine, I'm not asking you to change anything if you don't want to.


Also! I am going to be shooting for 9pm EST for the first post. I need to get stuff sorted out, and it's going to be fucking long with all these characters. Anyways, I'll keep everyone posted if things change.