[quote=@TalijaKey] Hm.. I am pretty sure I need to work on a few more things. But hope the main feel of it is okay. Couldnt give him guns so gave him a crossbow instead. ANd I am not sure who his parents would be. I know he should be related to the king's family. Not sure where exactly to place him on the family tree. Maybe could talk with someone else who makes a character in spider house about that. Bounce some ideas off? [hider=character Spider man Noir] [hr] [hr] [center][h2][color=black]Spiderman Noir (Noir P. Parker)[/color][/h2][/center] [hr] [hr] [center][img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/marveldatabase/images/9/98/Peter_Parker_(Earth-7140).jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130624132240[/img] [/center] [h3][color=black]"If there is too much power, then it is the responsibility of the people to take it away." [hr] "I collect [b]facts[/b], and I figure out the [b]story[/b]. And when I determine who the bad guys in the story are, I [b]punish them[/b]."[/color][/h3] [center][h3][color=black]~General Information~[/color][/h3] [color=black][b]Name:[/b][/color] Spiderman Noir [color=black][b]Formal Name:[/b][/color] Noir P. Peter [color=black][b]Gender:[/b][/color] Male [color=black][b]Age:[/b][/color] 36 [color=black][b]Height:[/b][/color] 5' 10" [color=black][b]Weight:[/b][/color] 174 lbs (79 kg) [color=black][b]Allegiance/ House:[/b][/color] House of Spider [color=black][b]Place Of Origin:[/b][/color] House of Spider. [color=black][b]Social Class:[/b][/color] Lord [color=black][b]Faith:[/b][/color] Web of Spider [color=black][b]What does your character desire most?:[/b][/color] Peace and balance. [b][color=black]Personal Philosophy:[/color][/b] What has to be done, has to be done. [b][color=black]Notable Equipment & Weaponry:[/color][/b] Spider-Man suit, trench coat. He also uses a sepia colored uniform with a vest in the non-winter months. A small black crossbow which he carries either on his side under the coat or on his back. [h3][color=black]~Skills~[/color][/h3] [b]Spider-Man's Spider-Sense[/b] - has a spider-sense, which warns him of dangers. [b]Combat[/b] - Trained in the combat art of a spider, being agile and acrobatic, as well as being skilled in parkour. [b]Stealth & Maneuverability[/b] - Staying in the shadows and stalking out the enemy. [b]Good shot[/b] - Has a good aim, and uses a crossbow. [h3][color=black][b]A List of Powers/Spells attributes of your character:[/b][/color][/h3] -Enhanced Senses -Mastered the Spell of web shooting. -Mastered the Spell of wall crawling. [/center] [center][h3][b][color=black]~Relationship Information~[/color][/b][/h3] [color=black][b]Relationship Status:[/b][/color] Single. [color=black][b]Sexuality:[/b][/color] Heterosexual [color=black][b]Partner:[/b][/color] None at the moment [color=black][b]Father: [/b][/color] - ??? [color=black][b]Mother:[/b][/color] -??? [color=black][b]Siblings:[/b][/color] - (Open to other spider-men multiverse.) [color=black][b]Pet/s:[/b][/color] None. [color=black][b]Other:[/b][/color] None.[/center] [b][color=black]Appearance[/color][/b] - Brown hair, and brown eyes, and a somewhat distant aura. Noir, prefers to keep to himself, but it doesnt mean he is unable to be social.Even so all his contacts are mostly shallow. The few he calls friends he keeps them on an arm length for their safety. He has a adecvate dressing style that is representative of the house of spider. Thougth the style still leans towards more simple style, and darker tones. He wears glasses and can be found reading in the library or archives. Noir keeps in shape and regularly practice his crossbow skills. His suit is invariably black, with a vest during the summer and a coat during the winter. Black boots, gloves and a black mask with black glasses all add to hide his appearance and help him blend in the shadows. [hider=Gallery] [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111021191652/spiderman/images/1/10/Noir_Spider-Man_(Peter_Parker).JPG[/img] [img]https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/db/95/17/db9517b2464cb0005499b706d88b8f28.jpg[/img] [img]http://cdn.wallpapersafari.com/14/16/dLgpjE.jpg[/img] Crossbow [img]http://www.power24server.de/bp-files/waffenschaulade/italienische-armbrust-zur-deko-426801.jpg[/img] [/hider] [color=black][b]Biography[/b][/color]: Born in the house of Spider, he was trained in the art of spider and quickly took liking to it. As he grew up the slight difference in approaching and dealing with problems became more notiable. His methods differentiated in being more done to bone. As well as being more prone to strive for balance in powers. After the death of lord Ben he became more determined to punish the bad man. Ready to do what was needed. This was the time as well when he moved out of the capital. He moved to live in one of the bigger cities and as a Lord helping it, and at night looking out for criminals and scum as a spider. At any conflict of the past he was called to help his kingdom he would come. He would look annoyed, but he would come without a second wasted and do everything to the best of his abilities to whatever it is needed. He loves the land and loves the people. He often was send out as a spy, as stealth is one of his preferences and skills. There were times he was terrified, but he never stopped to push on the mask hiding it from everyone but himself. And each time he returned to his city and his home he would forget the big troubles in a glass of alcohol or a lady of the night. To in the morning to return to his normal life. [/hider] [/quote] [@NubianLegend]; I have to say that I like this idea and premise for this particular character- it reminds me of Assassin's Creed, and I love that you've taken the whole Spider Man concept and created a sort of fighting style around it to explain how he does in combat. I personally like the character, and would be happy to accept him- I think he will definitely create an interesting dynamic when interacting with other characters in the roleplay. But anyway, that's just my opinion; it's ultimately up to you Nubian o: [hr][hr] [@KillBox]; welcome to the roleplay..! Of course we're still accepting, feel free to start working on/ pop up a character, and if you have any questions, don't be afraid to shoot them up and ask them :'3