[@arockysmith] Don't be so hard on yourself. Most of the time my posts end up rather long in the beginning but then end up becoming much shorter as the RP goes on just because of interaction. I'm sure any number of us (-points up to Filthy Mudblood-) would be willing to help you out if that was what it took. I, myself, have plans to become a middle grades english teacher so any chance to help someone improve their writing, I'll take. 

And speaking on posts, once I at least get a bit of reading done for this other class, I'll be making posts. So ye. :D