[quote=@ClocktowerEchos]RD, yes you do have influence over the RP in my stead to a limited degree mate :P
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So much imaginary and totally limited power... Must... Destroy... Peoples... Dreams...

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[@RisenDead] Lets see... Ima go through each. I'm glad there are criticisms, though. Means I have thing to work on ^-^ 

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1) I'm not sure how to dispute this one. I mean, they are a bit OP. I've just pulling the bits I've decided on before together and hoping it goes well XD

2) They are far from just a war party. They're here to take some free land, move their people in, and make friends with everyone so they dont have to fight any longer. They are a mostly militant force, yes, but they aren't here to fight.

3) The problem with this is that the Motherland is still locked in war. They dont have much to spare, but will spare whatever they can. Its not like they can just go "Send us several boats of soldiers", because most of all soldiers are still on the lines. Its more "We need this many soldiers, but send what you can". 

4) The human connection isn't around, its the personal connection. The only non militant personal they brought are farmers, mechanics, pharmacists, builders and medics. Its the personal connection. These people are here to settle, not fight. They are physically and mentally afraid of having to fight again, due to the fighting they've already been through. It doesn't LOOK like theres a human aspect, but I'll work on it.

5) Being well rounded would have lost them the war hundreds of years ago. They went from a cultured civilisation to a militaristic empire in the span of a year - devoting everything they had just to stay alive. Sure, it was their own fault in the beginning, but what can they do? They've been fighting for too long just to make peace, so all thats left to do is win, lose, or flee. The less they are forced to fight the better.
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What d'ya think?

EDIT: [@ClocktowerEchos] you too XD
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1) Then maybe remove "Ninja Blood crystals" and bits like that? Less "everything about us can kill you!" and more, "We are badass but totally can't survive all things"?

2) I suggest adding that to your sheet then? Because until you added this little Objection, I had no idea they existed! My satellites are down, I can't see them...

3) That thingy I quoted is exactly what that sounds like. Could I suggest (Para-phrasing here):
You: "Hey! We need stuff and people to die for our cause!"
Homeland: "Uh, yea, about that. Here's some old crap we don't need, and some old folks and young folks who aren't helpful to us. But we're totally helping!" 
All in the spirit of the British after they helped create Israel, and they ignored them, basically patting themselves on the back going "LOL, we did good guys".

4) Totally did not get that from your sheet, throw that in and I could be convinced. 

5) I hear you on this, but keep in mind they're coming to a land thats also been fighting forever, so you're not going to be so much better than your neighbours. Probably on par if anything, I suppose it depends on who you've been fighting. They've done some pretty piss poor recon is they're showing up in the area expecting a rest cure. 
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I think I got it all. Much of it is semantics but if you go to war with someone, it's good for them to know that you're more than uber-cool/elite/killer of all things, and can actually be fought.

Just wanted to throw it out there that I like your faction, and I'm not trying to be a pain in the ass, I just want to make sure everyone can feel like it's kept to the same standard as theirs is. You may know, in your heart of hearts, you don't intend to play them as OP and are totally cool with losing, but others might not know that or see it that way.