Derv u write some of the better oocs. He helped me with one of mine at the old guild, and because of his help, his push in the right direction, it took off! I had a good 5 or 6 people take interest in the very same idea that had failed a week before talking to Dervish here. He knows what he's talking about!

I have an rp ooc I wouldn't mind u rating on a scale to 10 Dervish, just to see what you'd think of it. I've gotten enough members, I'd just honestly like your op and any ideas where it could've been improved. A good ooc is arguably the most important factor for getting an rp started! Mind if i pm u the link?