[@SoleAccord] Going by NuCanon the first SSD was the Executor while there are other bits from Legends this and having Luke at the Battle of Barkesh isn't going to work as in NuCanon he's being kept rather busy. You can have Wedge though. Other than this you're good.

[@Legion-114] Couple of typos that you may want to clean up (Nothing against them, this is casual not advanced) other than that it's fine but what did he do in the time between the Battle of Endor and heading to Taris?