[@Holy Soldier]

Thanks for the clarification there, was just a wee bit confused.

As for your second point - as it happens, I don't want every personality trait listed. If I did, I would have asked you to list your top six traits like The Sims. Your CS is not only your application for a character, but it gives me a sense of how you'll write them - so of course, I want a basic overview of what they are like, bad traits and good traits alike. If I see nothing but bad traits, I'll want some good ones to know that you are capable of writing in a balanced manner. The same applies for only good traits. So, yes, do be so kind as to add some in - I do need to know if you're capable of writing at the standard I am wanting, after all.

And that Fatal Flaw works nicely - just try and mention somewhere in his personality that he'll do something stupid for a pretty face, kay? And maybe also his romantic interest section; from a guy who "has to kick women" out of his house after sleeping with them, it doesn't seem very likely he'd go down the martyr road for a girl who turned his head.