[quote=@Esoteric] I have no doubts about your ability haha, I hope I didn't go overboard with the lore. I really wanted to show my vision, and I've had a lot of help doing it. [/quote] I've been reading though small bits when I've had time and while you have a lot of info, your reference to the Hunger Games is an example of why you can't really skip out on any bits. Hunger Games had different districts, it had rules, laws, status and uniqueness. The Tracker Jackers was an insect and yet it lead to some big parts within the story. You can't really create a world of this depth without writing up a mini documentary. You've got vehicles, places, gangs, VIPs, factions. there's a lot to offer and a heap of opportunity for players.