[@Ojo chan 42] D'aww, you're hardly terrible, and I'm not that good.  ^.^;  I'm glad I didn't annoy you too much before, at least.  I worry about doing it but that doesn't seem to help me avoid it much.  Besides, everyone improves over time, and then you'll look back and cringe at your old stuff.  Trust me, I do it all the time.  =P  Anyhow, your research is solid for sure -- and usually when it comes to a fantasy setting, I just go with loose ideas, instead of specifics, at least for historical stuff.  Sometimes I'll get into what happened when in specific years (Fallen London made me do this, and I decided to do it for Sini's disastrous trip to the Mortal Realm.  With Templar, I saw he was doing that already so I just jumped in!), but usually?  I don't care if you have cars a few decades early, or if maybe you get some real facts wrong.  What I tend to focus on is how things fit together in the new world we use to write in.  Does it make sense for it to happen, and do future events get shaped accordingly.  Like...I'm not picking, promise, but I'm going to use some examples from your stuff.  You have Laira, growing up without a mother.  If she's used to being around people that treat her alright even though she doesn't know them well (for example, if she's bounced around between decent foster homes, as an orphan might be -- this does assume decent ones, but *shrug*) then she'd be more trusting, and you have an excellent reason why she would think very little of giving Clyde her full name, even though she doesn't know him.  Stuff like that, intentional or otherwise, makes me happy.  <3

I should note that unless I /really/ don't like someone (and honestly, I don't find many people like that) I tend to fuss more about things I'm interested in, that give me ideas and that I like.  Kinda counter-productive, yeah?  ^.^;;

[@LAdyRunic][@Zahrale] Well this just made things messy.  <.<;;

Also a sudden and somewhat random question.  What happens if Falk orders one of his fey to do something they are unable to do.  Like...Iunno, somethign that is literally physically impossible and there's no actual way to even attempt it?  Do they explode or something like a computer that doesn't know how to break logic loops?