[quote=@ScreenAcne]
I just wanna, see if people feel if my start is ugly or not. It's only like...the first, motherfucking. choice. But I'd rather see if people think it looks off the wall and in the bin now than later:
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That's pretty good. I think that the start is good (great choice options in Alien and each race is differentiated fairly well). Of course, some people [i]may[/i] not like it because it is considerably more tabletop than a standard forum RP, as they have less control over what they want to play, IE, Puritan Human, Uplifted Puppies.

Of course, if you're looking for the other definition of ugly (that of an unappealing nature), then it looks rather rough. If you want, I can make a more balanced image of it when I get back tomorrow.