[@Ashevelendar] Since I am the Co-GM, you get my input (yay)! And I have some very strong opinions of this character.

Really tall, dead parents and Batman complex out the ass, really pretty faceclaim, MMA training, "gun training" (Honestly, I don't see her doing more than recreational gun shooting which is [i]vastly[/i] different from gun training unless her parents wanted her to follow in their footsteps or something), and etc. She just seems a little too good/perfect. I mean, I'm not saying she's a mary sue, but all of this seems pretty contrived tbh. Especially since she doesn't seem to have any character traits beyond it, but okay.

And what's with the spaces before [i]and[/i] after every comma? Seems weird. lol