[@Banana] We;re on the right track, just a few things. [list][*]Go ahead and remove any mention of his being a Master. Everything described is pure Thinker, he just made the Eye and works it via remote control. [*]How did his family afford a bunker and a farm for him? The history says he grew up in a normal house, so something major had to have happened for them to be able to buy this. I need that covered in greater detail. [*]Eklispe brings up a good point. How does his power act as a "solution" to his trigger? [*]Put all information about The Eye in the equipment portion. We'll need full detailed specs on what it is capable of, including if it can interface with computers, has speakers Overlook talks through, so on and so forth. [*]The limitation listed isn't really a limitation on his power. His Thinker power is a great general intelligence with focus on computers and strategy, right? So there needs to be some sort of limitation to his ability to process that information. A general rule of thumb for most thinkers is that if they have incomplete or incorrect information, they can come to the wrong conclusions. Something like that would be more apt while what you have described is a standard fear and limitation of resources, nothing that is actually related to the power itself.[/list] Those are all the big things that should be addressed here, and once they are, Overlook should be good to go.