[quote=@Vec] [@LokiLeo789] I don't get how just simply saying "Pride" makes Amartia instantly turn 300 of Vowzra's most loyal soldiers betray him and follow a random demigod. I would think that [@Kho] would say something about this... [/quote] [quote=@Kho] Just retro-edited aspects of Loki's post so it makes more sense (the whole thing with the spider is impossible on Chronos after all - assume that he did not realise he'd been knocked out and the rest of that part was a dream sequence.) [/quote] Ya I apology for the mediocre if not absolute 'meh' post. Was in a rush to catch up, so I apologize for any confusion I may have caused. If any at all. These next few posts I promise will be quality and will be filled with much needed character development. Ill call it 'A Trip Back Home!' (Featuring 300 converted Victors and the creation of the concept of fornication and creating a spear from a death gods legs.) Edit: I am also wondering if it alright to time skip Sin's travels abit. Have him leave the frozen tundra completely and stumble upon a human settlmemt a ways away. Sinful stuff you know.