Yeah, definitely feel free to message me if you have any suggestions to make. And I agree with Fated, it sounds like you have some really intricate lore prepared so it is difficult to know what we can and can't assume, such as the look of the necklaces, etc... If you don't want to be explicit IC it might be nice for a growing OOC glossary as you reveal more to us. That way you don't have to reveal everything right off but can add important bits of lore for us to keep in mind when interacting with new things.

As a side note, Fetzen, you chose a rather unfortunate name for your character. I can't look at it without reading "An Asshat" and I swear I'm not dyslexic.

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