[quote=@AbandonedIntel]The lights showed up over time. They were nearly blinding, and Kirk whimpered as Gabby shielded her eyes. [color=ed1c24][b]"What the fuck!?"[/b][/color] Gabby called out as the lights came... and after a bit... they were gone. Just like that. And at that moment... she felt something... [i]different.[/i] She felt fear, uncertainty... but it wasn't [i]hers[/i]... She looked to Kirk. Kirk was looking straight into her eyes. Both of them were staring at each other for the longest amount of time. Gabby felt this connection with Kirk... not anything like one would have to a family member or a loved one, but... a real [i]connection[/i]... and Kirk looked just as weirdly confused as Gabby was. Kirk whimpered a little, and scratched a little at the Fiero's door. 
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If I were to give a little bit of constructive criticism; this post has waaaaaaay too many "..."'s. lol