[@solidsneek] Hi! few things I'd like to discuss, concerning your CS. Let's "last in, first out" the beginning of this. The picture - it's always been the hardest part for me to come up with, aside from character name. But maybe I misinterpreted your last post. Did you have one chosen that you weren't overly happy with, or were you asking to completely avoid choosing one? Now, as for your CS: It is incomplete. Rules in the OOC clearly state that no partial CSs it to be put into the OOC. It gets confusing. Likewise, CSs should be tucked away in a hider. If you're unfamiliar with the coding, we can help. A good start would be to familiarize yourself with the Cheatsheet at the bottom of the page. (hit the Toggle button, it will explain much). Personal difficulties I have with your character sheet: Your skills do not seem to reflect the entirety of what you want your character to do. I would take the time to really look at your character's role in a group, or tactics while alone when addressing his skills. Further, you cannot use any other part of the CS to sneak in additional skills (i.e. the "Strengths" section toward the top of the CS lists him with nonspecific Survival, something that does not also show up in his "Skills" section.) You are switching between the first and third person, a [i]lot[/i]. Stick to the third person, and past tense, when dealing with your character. Mixed perspective and tense really throws things off. Color Coding - It is required that you pick a text color, personalized to your character. This color cannot be the same as (or too similar to) anyone else's character. It is used in your headers in the IC, and is the color of his dialogue. You also have not made the changes that Lady A requested, including filling out the entirety of the CS. You've got a few sections that are sparse, notably History, and a couple that are completely blank, like Psychological Traits. Another note - You have him listed as a Fighter, but the abilities you have listed put him more in the area of Ranger or Rogue. Again, if you're unsure where to start with this, drop me a PM. I can more effectively communicate with you, without cluttering up the OOC. In any case, please throw your CS in a hider. If you are unaware as to how to do that, click the Toggle button at the bottom right of the page, and scroll down to where it says "Hiders". Best of luck here in roleplayerguild.com; it gets easier with practice.