[@Shadow Daedalus] excellent! Would you be willing to start with a couple less willpower as you used your powers in your backstory (and your mark has spread a little already?) If you take this offer, you may have a bonus 4 willpower in your life after this one to make up for the sacrifice in the name of story :D 

EDIT: just realised you've already put this in your other section anyway :D! That's great! The offer is open for increased willpower in your next life since you're taking a hit in the name of awesome backstory!

I am loving your god concept. Daethaneus and Raydark might get along. Perhaps Daethaneus used him when he was "mortal" as an agent of war. 

Also I believe [@Framing A Moose] is making a goddess of death, so maybe you two could chat and see if you'd want to be involved in each other's backstories :D If not that is completely fine - as I've mentioned previously, there may be many gods for one concept, so it may have been another death goddess who bore your character.

Abysmal Hatred: can you place an amount of time this is in effect? Maybe a couple hours as this is in the weak ability section?