[@sakurasan]Just some thoughts so far, the WIP is going well though :D 

[hider=adjustments so far]Can you finish off the mark in her appearance section?

The younger brother - was he born to another mother or adopted or something?

Also interesting family buisness! Do the clients know of the curse? Either way I will work it into the story :D

There's a duplicated paragraph in the "Formative Moments" section

what does the "expression" skill/trait do? does it scare people?

I would say that inability to feel pain would be more of a combat ability then a survival one. Please can you adjust your skillset to reflect this? two combat and one survival, sorry to be a pain.

I look forward to seeing your abilities too! Let me know when you'd like me to review it again.[/hider]