[quote=@ZekariVoblis]
I'm gonna be in the "Corner of Hopefully Not Terrible Writing" while I wait for judgement.
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I mean from a quick perusal of the app, I see a few issues. The first was the dragon roaming the land and terrorizing people, but I see that was scrapped and replaced by a Demon Beast. Dragons aren't like the standard fantasy dragons. Most of them are just replacements for horses. Some are revered as gods because of their power to seal great evil. Though Re;Zero is a fantasy light novel series, it isn't akin to something like D&D, despite obvious western influences. 

The next issue would be the use of fire magic on "mixed gases". This is a fantasy world. I do not believe natural gases are pumped through any sort of pipes like current day. Would be kinda odd. There is probably running water, but that's been in existence since the Romans, Egyptians, Chinese and Indians and before medieval times, but running gases would not have any purpose. 

The last part that I take problem with is that the way that RBD works in this roleplay, you would not be able to fight the same Demon Beast with the same party every single time since only you reset, not the party you are with. I mean if you wanna keep that part, just know that it would of had to have been with a different grou; of adventurers each time. And dying constantly like that will have your character start with a few tokens of insanity, so sleeping out in the forest might just make your life the most dangerous there ever was. To read more about insanity, see this: http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3895731 idk if the GM  added it to the title page yet, but here it is. 

[@FamishedPants]

Accepted 

[@Ryofu]

Accepted