[@tsukune] Yeah, I agree, but I've seen the second style in some books (especially more classical literature in my own country) so I was wondering what the general consensus is. As for my English, English is my fourth language but since I speak English in class every day, not to mention online in voice chats, I've become quite good at that. 

The main problem for me is always the size. I don't want my speech to drag on longer than the description that goes with it - it looks strange. It often leads to me adding fluff to the description to make it more balanced, but I don't want to do that, because it's useless. :/