[@tsukune] It's frequently either scenes where there is something happening (though for these types of literature it's really dull stuff, like, there's this one book I read about a Dutch florist, his wife and their child, and their familial problems in old Dutch times (like, 1960) and there were scenes where all he did was ride around delivering flowers, there were entire scenes dedicated to writing about the different types of flowers, flower-technicalities and other such things, where you'd get some thoughts of the character.

Then there's other scenes where he was talking to his wife, customers, or his child, and such. They were written like that though not exactly. Sometimes a brief description of a new movement/action, but often just back-and-forth conversations.

I think your style of writing is pretty similar to the first style, which is I guess how most people on RPG do it. I'm still curious about other peoples opinions however.