[@Write] Just to confirm, which two skills are her combat ones? Hand of God: Can you elaborate on this please? Sounds like it could be instakill at short range. Embers and coals: perfect :D Aether: I love the idea of flight for an ability, but for both a height/speed buff it might be a little much for Weakest 3. Maybe decrease the height and make it 1.5x running speed? Low level clouds are typically 6,500 ft up with mid level clouds going up to 23,000ft according to google. Plus I will say not everything up there is nice ;D So maybe up to 380 ft? That's the height of a redwood... anyway... getting off track. Snap: I think this is pretty powerful for a Medium 1 ability. It is basically an instakill :P I think switch Swallow and Take up the Palette around. Shooting through buildings/woods is a little less powerful then moving tectonic plates. You don't have to change either, just switch 'em round :D End of an Era: seems fine to me :P I think when it comes down to it, I'll probably GM rule any distances for the big ultis (since i'll be drawing them on an inaccurate map ;D) so don't worry about that. Also I love the gigantic flora/fauna stuff, nice touch :D Let me know when you're ready for me to reread it! [@Framing A Moose] yeah sure, I changed Pan's sexuality for maximum pun-levels. Also I haven't rolled starkissed yet. What're you changing it to so I can update my info? [@McHaggis]Before i roll, do you want to put an if-then rule in place? e.g. over a certain age, in a certain clan, ect.