[@Thecrash20] What [@Gareth] speaks it's true.

So I looked over your CS. There are some problems in it. 
[list][*] All Dark Humans are born in the Dark Human lands. They are not "allowed" to go to other places due to people being afraid they'll get sick. 
[*] The spells. You have a basic spell and two complex ones. The first one ( the blade ) I can overlook but the second one is too powerful and if any Templar would see those markings he would kill your character when he was a child.
[*] All Magi are sent to the Citadel as soon as they are born. There are devices that find magical energy in newborns so as soon as they are born Templar are sent either to kill or take the child from their parents. If the parents don't want to give the child they are killed. If they hide him , he is found ( the same way the Empire finds out that a Magi kid is born ) and killed.
[*] All Magi are raised in the Citadel so they are all "strong" due to living in a prison all their lives.
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I hope I don't sound too harsh but...edit in and tag ( @Mention ) me and I'll look it over again :)

[@Venku] Your turn to post and then I can continue. 

[@Shadow Daedalus] Yep. Everyone has a bomb inside them. A way to make sure they don't kill each other or run away. Also a way to kill them all by killing only one of them if they disobeyed. 
Thinking about it , this could be used in real life too. In prisons I mean. That way you can quell any idea of rebellion or killing between the inmates. A "cure" would be given to the ones that were on the death bed or those that had the idea to suicide. Like it would be a...time bomb ? 2 hours after the person dies , if the bomb is not defused everyone dies. This only could be used at Maximum security prisons where people don't go because they've stolen a car.  

[@gareth] Thanks for the kind words about the map :) I'll try to update it as the RP progresses. Maybe even make a new one each time our party explores a location. Maybe make maps for each location ? Something like a map for let's say...one of the Magi towers.