[@dabombjk] this is totally up to [@Mae], being the GM, and I'm most likely stepping a little out of line here but there are a few things in your CS that don't quite add up? :3 this is probably me just being [s]an arrogant little shit[/s] picky, but here are a few suggestions; [hider][indent][quote]He preferred his black short sleeve V-neck, with his dark green hooded jacket and black jeans. With shoes he was not picky, and was currently wearing black and brown slip on shoes.[/quote][/indent] I believe that this first part of the roleplay is set in a tribal era - like, with the way of life being very primitive - so I doubt that jeans or hoodies exist quite yet. It'd be safe to assume that animal skins and very basic sewing is the norm, so you might want to change that (?)...again, its not really my place to be saying this. [indent][quote] [color=9999FF][b]Memories Retained:[/b][/color] [color=cccccc]Ignore for now[/color] [list][The memory of marrying his once beloved.] [The memory of his only daughter being born.] [The memory of what it felt like when his soul was crushed and he felt all hope lost, starting to slowly lose his grasp on reality.][/list][/quote][/indent] For now, Mae has told us to leave this blank (for future reincarnations I think, but I may be wrong). So, right now, our characters have not retained any memories and this section has been placed for future editing. [indent][quote][color=#9999FF][h3][quote=Unknown][/quote][/h3][/color][/quote][/indent] I suggest you take a look at everyone else's characters. You'll find that none of the Gods are pre-existing ones, and that we have all created completely new ones. As far as I know, this isn't a Greak Mythology roleplay. While your character may be inspired by pre-existing immortals, they can't be that God. For example, you mentioned other Greek Gods such as Zeus and Iris - unfortunately they don't exist in this roleplay :3 [/hider] Obviously a lot of work had been put into your CS and I think it's lovely, but it might possibly be best for you to re-read everything and adjust certain aspects of your character to fit this roleplay. Of course, though, as I've said a billion times, it's not really up to me so feel free to completely ignore this ;D EDIT : Also 800th post woo