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Looks good so far, Dedonus, though I'll ask for a little bit more in appearance; you put his ethnicity, which makes me assume brown hair/brown eyes/olive skin, and that he's clean shaven, but not much else, really. Height, weight, hair style/length, etc. would all be appreciated.
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Okay, I will try to expand on it when I start working on the CS again today.