[@Holy Soldier]

I made the corrections. As for why I posted in both... because I was afraid that if I didn't start posting soon, I would be left behind and it would be difficult to hop into the Rp. Besides, the only thing that still needed work was one ability... that I am not using at the moment.

1. Life Drain: [i]If Keith is within three meters of a single target, he can call upon the dark powers at his command to rip the very life out of them, draining their health over time in order to restore his own and heal his own injuries (Through there are limits to the injuries that can be healed). Exactly how quickly this ability kills is dependent on how strong and healthy the target is, through ten uses of it could take down a demi god... if the user can survive that long.

Overuse of this ability can actually result in the user getting physically younger.[/i]