[quote=@Gisk]
[@Minato Namikaze] Yeah, they pegged it, friend.  You need to separate speakers by a paragraph.  You might break some of those chunks of text up in other ways, too.  They're just a bit awkward to read.  

Also, problem with the post.  Did you read the other posts, or the CSes attached to the characters, before posting?  Kassidy(Kyrisse's character)'s mum owns and operates the Cafe, and in her post they haven't left to open up shop yet.  So it's not open right now.  A good thing to do would be to arrive just before it opens, and be there when they arrive to unlock the door.  

And Zoey works there, too, so it's kind of weird for you to interact with an NPC when there's a bunch of player characters in that exact position that could have been there for you to talk to.    
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[@Gisk][@Minato Namikaze] I'll put in something for the cafe in my next post so that Minato won't need to edit so much.