Hey, I didn't really mind it. Sorry for ribbing you about it.

If it was your intention to imply that Vowzra was actively hiding his feelings, you were subtle enough. What wouldn't have been good is if you left those descriptions in there as a way to pad things out without them being relevant in the slightest. I'm glad to hear that it wasn't the latter. Making sure that the reader knows the difference sounds like the hard part.

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