[hider=How I feel now that this week is over...] [img]http://www.barnesandnoble.com/blog/barnesy/wp-content/uploads/2013/10/zombie_hand.jpg[/img][/hider] I swear I did not mean to disappear on you folks, but between 2 exams and an ungodly amount of work, I had very little time to get back to you all. [@Mangrale] [s]Blacklight[/s] Black Mass is good to go, but I would like some clarification on the difference between his [i]Default[/i] and [i]Altered[/i] forms that you bring up in the enhancements section. It also seems to me like you aren't leaving all that much room for his power to grow (especially if you are planning on him developing Devastors later on), so it may be prudent for him to only start with one or two constructs. [@Shadow Daedalus] As our all-mighty Co-GM has said, I would definitely prefer if we didn't have to split up the numbers and seeing as the turn out here is a bit less than from the Interest Check, we will likely go that route. I'll sort out the overlapping numbers soon, I promise. [@EnterTheHero] Virgil looks good to me as well. Glad to have you on board. [@Slendy] Atlas looks good, but being a sucker for numbers I would really appreciate it if you could give me some more concrete information on his Ability. Namely, I would like to know the maximums for both the range and duration of it and also if their are any weight limitations that you feel are prudent to mention. [@HaltingBlooper] It looks like you have a pretty solid start on the CS, but I would definitely like to see his personality expanded on a bit more. You could expand on it by mentioning things such as how he interacts with others (on a team or otherwise), the kinds of things he does enjoy talking about, his motivations, and so on. Don't sweat it too much, as a paragraph or two is all I'm really looking for here, but hopefully these suggestions will help get the ball rolling. Also, I would like to see a little more detail on his Ability. Is there an effective range at which he can manipulate water? And if so, does the speed at which he can manipulate it change the further it is from him? Asking yourself those kinds of questions should help you flesh out the ability more. [@Holy Soldier] It wasn't so much so that I was waiting on everyone from the Interest Check, but more so that this week has been a complete drain on my free time. I don't have a definite date for when I'll open up the IC, but we will be starting soon. As for the setting, I felt that it would be fine for this to take place on Earth not too far in the future. I'll add more details to the first post of the OoC when I get a chance. Alrighty, hopefully I'm caught up now. Thanks for your patience folks, somebody poke/yell at me if I missed something.