[quote=@Baklava] [@Letter Bee] Ah... well, then can I ask what you don't like about the character? It's kind of hard to form a decisive opinion without reading it all, wouldn't you say? I read everyone's character sheet word for word. I figured it was kind of important. :/ [/quote] I didn't like the fact that your character, judging from the Personality Section and the Colin Powell quote, as well as the beginning and the end of the Bio, believes that Magic in any way precludes hard work and guts (although a few do use Magic to show off, that's not the same as lazing around). Nor do I like the fact that she treats Magic and coming to Four Winds as a personal calamity just because she agrees with society.